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THE YOUNG FAIRY
Once upon a time lived a tiny fairy, she was called Poppy and she didn't have any powers and one day she met a devil,she didn't know it was a devil, so she and the devil talked and talked. Then when she got home she felt weird and there were fairy cops in the house thinking that she was missing. She went through time.
The next day the fairy was looking for Poppy and there was no sign of her at all. They saw some strawberries,but they thought that it was blood.
"Oh no," said everyone.
"She's dead!"shouted her mum.
"OK" said dad. "It might not be blood but yes try and find her."
They all got into 5 groups and somebody found a magic passage way and then she came back the next day dirty and blood thirsty old tattered safe little girl.
Robert C
Age 10
Year 6
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Thursday, 3 September 2009
Monday, 31 August 2009
"Jamie: Treasure Hunter" by Robert C, Age 10, Year 6
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"Jamie: Treasure Hunter"
Once a upon a time there lived a man called Jamie Beanleys and his crew hunted, hunted for treasure.
They got tired every day digging, digging and digging,in the distance where the other battlements.
"QUICKLY RUN"said Jamie.
"QUICK RUN"said the crew.
Jamie fell over he hid behind a bush. He stuck his trusty sword and the dragon fell into the pond nearby and lived happily ever after.
ROBERT C
Age 10
Year 6
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"Jamie: Treasure Hunter"
Once a upon a time there lived a man called Jamie Beanleys and his crew hunted, hunted for treasure.
They got tired every day digging, digging and digging,in the distance where the other battlements.
"QUICKLY RUN"said Jamie.
"QUICK RUN"said the crew.
Jamie fell over he hid behind a bush. He stuck his trusty sword and the dragon fell into the pond nearby and lived happily ever after.
ROBERT C
Age 10
Year 6
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Friday, 14 August 2009
"Quest Story" by Tia E, Age 11, Year 6
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Tia's Quest Story
The following was created at the Bodmin Bookworm 'Create a Quest Story' workshop at Bodmin library on 14th August 2009:
Tia created a quest seeker called Lilly Moors. Lilly is 11 years old with long chestnut hair and golden brown eyes. She is very agile and NOT girly! Her favourite colour is blue and she loves to eat apples. Lilly dislikes boys and is scared of heights. If she had one wish it would be for peace. Her biggest fault is that she never thinks things through. Lilly's best friend is called Hope.
On her quest Lilly must find a pure Bronze book which can cure her village's plague. The book is shiny, heavy and bronze. She must find it before evil uses it for bad.
During her quest journey Lilly passes a dragon's cave which is steaming from the door. She passes on tiptoes. She has a close call with an evil villain and has to pass a river of fire. The bronze book is located at the top of a mountain. It is cold. Lilly smells the frozen wind and feels the watery cold feel of snow on her bare feet. Luckily she has packed rope and has Hope to give her good ideas. Lilly faces her fear of heights with Hope's help and comfort. Then Lilly discovers that she can fly.
They get the Bronze book. Lilly flies back home with Hope and uses the Bronze book to cure the plague.
THE END
(But is it?)
By Tia E
Age 11
Year 6
(But from Sept 09 Tia will be in year 7 at Bodmin College)
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Tia's Quest Story
The following was created at the Bodmin Bookworm 'Create a Quest Story' workshop at Bodmin library on 14th August 2009:
Tia created a quest seeker called Lilly Moors. Lilly is 11 years old with long chestnut hair and golden brown eyes. She is very agile and NOT girly! Her favourite colour is blue and she loves to eat apples. Lilly dislikes boys and is scared of heights. If she had one wish it would be for peace. Her biggest fault is that she never thinks things through. Lilly's best friend is called Hope.
On her quest Lilly must find a pure Bronze book which can cure her village's plague. The book is shiny, heavy and bronze. She must find it before evil uses it for bad.
During her quest journey Lilly passes a dragon's cave which is steaming from the door. She passes on tiptoes. She has a close call with an evil villain and has to pass a river of fire. The bronze book is located at the top of a mountain. It is cold. Lilly smells the frozen wind and feels the watery cold feel of snow on her bare feet. Luckily she has packed rope and has Hope to give her good ideas. Lilly faces her fear of heights with Hope's help and comfort. Then Lilly discovers that she can fly.
They get the Bronze book. Lilly flies back home with Hope and uses the Bronze book to cure the plague.
THE END
(But is it?)
By Tia E
Age 11
Year 6
(But from Sept 09 Tia will be in year 7 at Bodmin College)
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"Quest Story" by Emily E, Age 9, Year 5
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Emily's Quest Story
The following was created at the Bodmin Bookworm 'Create a Quest Story' workshop at Bodmin library on 14th August 2009:
Emily created a quest seeker - a talking horse called 'Lightning' who is one years old. Lightning has a very long mane, her favourite food is oats and she likes gold. Lightning brushes her teeth using pineapple flavoured toothpaste and likes to sleep in a bed of hay. She is friends with a butterfly and horse. Her worst habit is that she has muddy hooves. She is afraid of water.
On her quest Lightning must find the shiny golden hooves because then she can have four wishes.
On her journey Lightning flies to a castle that is loud, cold and smells of roses. She has to face swimming through water to reach the golden hooves. Her friend the butterfly uses her magic to give Lightning a mermaid tail so that she can swim through the water.
They get the hooves and.......
TO BE CONTINUED...........................
By Emily E
Age 9
Year 5
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Emily's Quest Story
The following was created at the Bodmin Bookworm 'Create a Quest Story' workshop at Bodmin library on 14th August 2009:
Emily created a quest seeker - a talking horse called 'Lightning' who is one years old. Lightning has a very long mane, her favourite food is oats and she likes gold. Lightning brushes her teeth using pineapple flavoured toothpaste and likes to sleep in a bed of hay. She is friends with a butterfly and horse. Her worst habit is that she has muddy hooves. She is afraid of water.
On her quest Lightning must find the shiny golden hooves because then she can have four wishes.
On her journey Lightning flies to a castle that is loud, cold and smells of roses. She has to face swimming through water to reach the golden hooves. Her friend the butterfly uses her magic to give Lightning a mermaid tail so that she can swim through the water.
They get the hooves and.......
TO BE CONTINUED...........................
By Emily E
Age 9
Year 5
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Monday, 13 July 2009
"Gran Can You Rap?" By Carl, Year 5
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Gran Can You Rap?
GRAN CAN YOU RAP?
CAN YOU RAP CAN YOU GRAN?
SHE OPENED ONE EYE
AND SAID TO MAN
I'M THE BEST RAPPING GRAN THIS WORLD EVER SEEN.
I'M A TIP TOP
SLIP SLAP
RAP RAP QUEEN!
By Carl
Year 5
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Gran Can You Rap?
GRAN CAN YOU RAP?
CAN YOU RAP CAN YOU GRAN?
SHE OPENED ONE EYE
AND SAID TO MAN
I'M THE BEST RAPPING GRAN THIS WORLD EVER SEEN.
I'M A TIP TOP
SLIP SLAP
RAP RAP QUEEN!
By Carl
Year 5
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Wednesday, 3 June 2009
"Dancing Hamster" By Jessica P, Age 7, Year 2
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Dancing Hamster
Amazing
Super star
I should sing humpty dumpty
NOT THAT LOUD
IN A LOW VOICE
NOW STOP THAT RACKET
GOOD SINGING
HAPPY WHEN I AM SINGING
A STORY WOULD BE QUIETER
MY FAVOURITE SONG IS LILY ALLEN
SINGING IS MY THING
TODAY I AM SINGING LILY ALLEN
ER MAYBE U CAN BE A BIT QUIETER
Ringing in your ears
By Jessica P
Age 7
Year 2
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Dancing Hamster
Amazing
Super star
I should sing humpty dumpty
NOT THAT LOUD
IN A LOW VOICE
NOW STOP THAT RACKET
GOOD SINGING
HAPPY WHEN I AM SINGING
A STORY WOULD BE QUIETER
MY FAVOURITE SONG IS LILY ALLEN
SINGING IS MY THING
TODAY I AM SINGING LILY ALLEN
ER MAYBE U CAN BE A BIT QUIETER
Ringing in your ears
By Jessica P
Age 7
Year 2
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"Singing Hamster" By Rosie D, Age 6, Year 2
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Singing Hamster
Sort of voice
I should sing a song
NOT SO LOUD!
Great singing
Independently please
NOT SO LOUD!
Good work guys
Having lots of fun
All having a turn at singing
My favourite song is sugarbabes
Singing softly
Today it is my lucky day
Entering the stage
Really really excited
By Rosie D
Age 6
Year 2
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Singing Hamster
Sort of voice
I should sing a song
NOT SO LOUD!
Great singing
Independently please
NOT SO LOUD!
Good work guys
Having lots of fun
All having a turn at singing
My favourite song is sugarbabes
Singing softly
Today it is my lucky day
Entering the stage
Really really excited
By Rosie D
Age 6
Year 2
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