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Friday 6 February 2009

"Rameses and Set" by Robert C, Year 5, Class 5cf

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Rameses and Set

Early one morning,when Rameses and Set opened their tired eyes as the sun rose high into the Egyptian sky like a disk of fire.The pharaoh asks them to trap birds.

Rameses trapped a duck,a fat duck,a poor duck.The younger brother,Set trapped a spider,a tiny spider,a vulnerable spider, the pharaoh was delighted but not that contessed.

The next day setting off at day break they went on the pharaohs hunt again,once again Rameses caught a duck,a fat duck,a squawking duck.Set caught a bolt of lightning,a golden bolt,a zapping it fizzed and hissed cracking with energy.

That evening the pharaoh asked them to make some griding stones so they can make a saddle quern,so they can grid the corn they tried they tried and they tried and the rough of the pharaoh face if they failed.

That evening the pharaoh asked them to get a star from the night sky,they knew this was impossible but they tried,tried and tried. Finally the younger brother called the spider for help with a hiss the spider threw out a sticky web across the night sky. All this because the younger brother had not killed what he could not eat.

By Robert C
Class 5f

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1 comment:

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