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Friday 14 August 2009

"Quest Story" by Tia E, Age 11, Year 6

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Tia's Quest Story
The following was created at the Bodmin Bookworm 'Create a Quest Story' workshop at Bodmin library on 14th August 2009:

Tia created a quest seeker called Lilly Moors. Lilly is 11 years old with long chestnut hair and golden brown eyes. She is very agile and NOT girly! Her favourite colour is blue and she loves to eat apples. Lilly dislikes boys and is scared of heights. If she had one wish it would be for peace. Her biggest fault is that she never thinks things through. Lilly's best friend is called Hope.

On her quest Lilly must find a pure Bronze book which can cure her village's plague. The book is shiny, heavy and bronze. She must find it before evil uses it for bad.

During her quest journey Lilly passes a dragon's cave which is steaming from the door. She passes on tiptoes. She has a close call with an evil villain and has to pass a river of fire. The bronze book is located at the top of a mountain. It is cold. Lilly smells the frozen wind and feels the watery cold feel of snow on her bare feet. Luckily she has packed rope and has Hope to give her good ideas. Lilly faces her fear of heights with Hope's help and comfort. Then Lilly discovers that she can fly.

They get the Bronze book. Lilly flies back home with Hope and uses the Bronze book to cure the plague.

THE END
(But is it?)

By Tia E
Age 11
Year 6
(But from Sept 09 Tia will be in year 7 at Bodmin College)

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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I think this story is very good. Keep up the good work!