Robert has mixed a little football history & fiction, writing about some sporting heroes:
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The Footballer
Once a upon a time lived a footballer called Ronaldo. On Tuesday it was a beautiful cloudy day but a little bit sunny. They went to the woods and they had a picnic with Wayne Rooney and Carlos Tevez and Nani. They all play for Manchester United.
One Wednesday they had to play with Chelsea and Nani, Rooney and Tevez almost got 1 goal 4 Manchester United, but then 5 min later Ronaldo scored and Lampard scored 4 Chelsea . But John Terry almost got it in when the goaly was out and the defender blocked it so it wouldn't be 2/1.
They had an extra time but it was still 1 all so they had a penalty shootout and the score was 6/5. So Manchester United had won the premiere league trophy.
By Robert C
Class 5
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3 comments:
cool from jasmine worden class 4
i love your story its amzing i wish i was you you are the best
iv ever seen
by megan baker
awwh thats really good :) well done (Y)
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