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My Magic Surprises
Mummy
Yummy
Sweets
Umbrella
Roses
Parrot
Ribbon
Important
Seaside
Emerald
Secret
By Rosie
Age 6
Year 2
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Saturday, 31 January 2009
"My Surprises" by Jessica, Age 7, Year 2
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My Surprises
Mare
yoyo
Sweets
umbrella
pearl
rose
information
stars
easter egg
seal
By Jessica
Age 7
Year 2
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My Surprises
Mare
yoyo
Sweets
umbrella
pearl
rose
information
stars
easter egg
seal
By Jessica
Age 7
Year 2
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Tuesday, 20 January 2009
"What Changed My Life" by Jaeden, Age 10, Year 5
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WHAT CHANGED MY LIFE!!!
All one happy family playing together.
Then something happened, something happy, something exciting.
I just don’t know how I’ll feel a big change, a lovely change, an upsetting change , an unexplainable change that brings joy, that brings sorrow.
Tomorrow my baby brother will be born.
Tomorrow my baby sister will be born.
Will I like him ?
Will I like her?
By Jaeden
Age 10
Year 5
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WHAT CHANGED MY LIFE!!!
All one happy family playing together.
Then something happened, something happy, something exciting.
I just don’t know how I’ll feel a big change, a lovely change, an upsetting change , an unexplainable change that brings joy, that brings sorrow.
Tomorrow my baby brother will be born.
Tomorrow my baby sister will be born.
Will I like him ?
Will I like her?
By Jaeden
Age 10
Year 5
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Saturday, 3 January 2009
Christmas Day of 2008 by Keira J, age 10, Year 6
Christmas Day of 2008!
I sit in bed with my heart thumping. Has Santa Claus already been, or is it too early? I shouldn’t check to see if there are presents at the end of my bed, or he might not come for fear of being seen. What should I do?
I wait for about half an hour. I decide to at least check the time. What harm could it do? 7.00AM says my phone. Phew, it’s morning. IT’S MORNING!!!!!
The time that follows is a big rush. I wake up my younger brother, and we grab our stockings and jump into mum and dad’s room.
“Wake up, wake up!” we shout. It takes a while for them to wake up, but we finally get to open our presents. Santa Claus brought Edward, my brother, a new alien toy, some lego sets, etc. etc. I got more sophisticated gifts. A new watch, make up, hair curlers, cds, books, DVDs, and some lovely skirts. Just what I asked for.
“Katie, can I try on your watch?” asks Edward. I am sure he will break it, but I decide not to be a party pooper. Anyway, he loves watches so I am sure he will be careful with it.
After a hurried breakfast, we all gather in the Sitting Room. I go and bring my cat, Skibbish, as well. Not only does he love playing with wrapping paper, but I bought him a small present.
We let Skibbish open his present first. Well, I sort of helped after he had sat there, looking cluelessly at it. Silly cat.
I got so many presents, I can hardly remember them all. I do remember Edward getting a Nintendo DS, as he threw the box at my nose. Ouch.
“Come on Mum, Dad, open your presents!” I beg, rubbing my poor nose.
Mum was delighted at her chocolates and slippers, and Dad was even more delighted at his album and dressing gown. Edward enjoyed the Bingo game I bought him. Skibbish sort of looked like he enjoyed the toys I bought him. At least he was more interested in them than in the wrapping paper.
“Katie, Edward, it might be best if you take these presents to your room before Skibbish starts thinking that they’re his presents,” Mum said.
At about 3.00PM we begin eating. Mmmmm, lovely warm gravy! Yuckkkkkk, horrid Brussel Sprouts!!!! For Desert we had dad’s home made Cherry Pie, which is DELICIOUS!!!
After lunch, I decide to call my best friend, Liz. I found out what she had for Christmas, and I told her what I had. It has been the best Xmas of my life!!!!!!!
I sit in bed with my heart thumping. Has Santa Claus already been, or is it too early? I shouldn’t check to see if there are presents at the end of my bed, or he might not come for fear of being seen. What should I do?
I wait for about half an hour. I decide to at least check the time. What harm could it do? 7.00AM says my phone. Phew, it’s morning. IT’S MORNING!!!!!
The time that follows is a big rush. I wake up my younger brother, and we grab our stockings and jump into mum and dad’s room.
“Wake up, wake up!” we shout. It takes a while for them to wake up, but we finally get to open our presents. Santa Claus brought Edward, my brother, a new alien toy, some lego sets, etc. etc. I got more sophisticated gifts. A new watch, make up, hair curlers, cds, books, DVDs, and some lovely skirts. Just what I asked for.
“Katie, can I try on your watch?” asks Edward. I am sure he will break it, but I decide not to be a party pooper. Anyway, he loves watches so I am sure he will be careful with it.
After a hurried breakfast, we all gather in the Sitting Room. I go and bring my cat, Skibbish, as well. Not only does he love playing with wrapping paper, but I bought him a small present.
We let Skibbish open his present first. Well, I sort of helped after he had sat there, looking cluelessly at it. Silly cat.
I got so many presents, I can hardly remember them all. I do remember Edward getting a Nintendo DS, as he threw the box at my nose. Ouch.
“Come on Mum, Dad, open your presents!” I beg, rubbing my poor nose.
Mum was delighted at her chocolates and slippers, and Dad was even more delighted at his album and dressing gown. Edward enjoyed the Bingo game I bought him. Skibbish sort of looked like he enjoyed the toys I bought him. At least he was more interested in them than in the wrapping paper.
“Katie, Edward, it might be best if you take these presents to your room before Skibbish starts thinking that they’re his presents,” Mum said.
At about 3.00PM we begin eating. Mmmmm, lovely warm gravy! Yuckkkkkk, horrid Brussel Sprouts!!!! For Desert we had dad’s home made Cherry Pie, which is DELICIOUS!!!
After lunch, I decide to call my best friend, Liz. I found out what she had for Christmas, and I told her what I had. It has been the best Xmas of my life!!!!!!!
A Snowman named William by Tom, age 8, Class 45R
Once there was a snowman named William, who always wanted to play with his snow buddies! But he could never move so he tried to get a hair dryer and blow himself to them. That didn’t work; he kept on melting so he tried shouting .And then his snow buddies came over and he played with them. But he was a bit embarrassed because he still couldn’t move. So he just enjoyed himself playing.
The next morning, he found himself rolling on a couple of timber logs. He started to do stunts and jumping high in to the air, he was ecstatic he could move but then the snow started to melt! He was so scared he screamed of fright and then he woke up .And found himself back home. IT WAS A NIGHTMARE!!!Well he rather be at home than dying from the snow melting. So he lived happily ever after.
The next morning, he found himself rolling on a couple of timber logs. He started to do stunts and jumping high in to the air, he was ecstatic he could move but then the snow started to melt! He was so scared he screamed of fright and then he woke up .And found himself back home. IT WAS A NIGHTMARE!!!Well he rather be at home than dying from the snow melting. So he lived happily ever after.
Thursday, 11 December 2008
"In the Land of the Christmas Cracker" by Eleanor F, Age 7, Year 3
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In The Land Of The Christmas Cracker
One night I stared out of the misty window watching snow fall down and lights flicker in the distance. Grandma and granddad sat eating their meal. Mother and papa stood in the kitchen fussing about presents while Billy sat on the red carpet in the living room playing with cars. I sat there looking at frozen over lakes and houses getting whiter and whiter every second. Billy then screamed “POST” Timmy our pet dog ran up to the post picked it up and came running to me immediately and dropped it front of me. I picked it up and here was what it said:
Dear Abbey and Billy
Merry nothing Christmas has been ruined by evil Jack Frost and his slave goblins. I myself gives you my dearest love and courage to let you go on a powerful journey with a friend and of course Billy to the land of the Christmas cracker and defeat the evil goblins.
Dearest Love
Santa
I sat there amazed at the letter that had just passed my eyes. I was silent until a thrash of reins outside broke it and little light could be seen through the thin white curtain that surrounded my body. I got paler and paler at the sight and passed into a deep sleep.
I was awoken by a soft hand that felt like velvet and a little “Hello”. I saw two people quite a thin person very short as well standing by my bed. “Who are you anyway? I’m Abbey”. I could make the shape of one person my brother but who was the other figure?
By Eleanor F (aka Ellie)
Age 7
Year 3
In The Land Of The Christmas Cracker
One night I stared out of the misty window watching snow fall down and lights flicker in the distance. Grandma and granddad sat eating their meal. Mother and papa stood in the kitchen fussing about presents while Billy sat on the red carpet in the living room playing with cars. I sat there looking at frozen over lakes and houses getting whiter and whiter every second. Billy then screamed “POST” Timmy our pet dog ran up to the post picked it up and came running to me immediately and dropped it front of me. I picked it up and here was what it said:
Dear Abbey and Billy
Merry nothing Christmas has been ruined by evil Jack Frost and his slave goblins. I myself gives you my dearest love and courage to let you go on a powerful journey with a friend and of course Billy to the land of the Christmas cracker and defeat the evil goblins.
Dearest Love
Santa
I sat there amazed at the letter that had just passed my eyes. I was silent until a thrash of reins outside broke it and little light could be seen through the thin white curtain that surrounded my body. I got paler and paler at the sight and passed into a deep sleep.
I was awoken by a soft hand that felt like velvet and a little “Hello”. I saw two people quite a thin person very short as well standing by my bed. “Who are you anyway? I’m Abbey”. I could make the shape of one person my brother but who was the other figure?
By Eleanor F (aka Ellie)
Age 7
Year 3
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Wednesday, 10 December 2008
"A Cold Winter's Night" by Corey, Age 11, Year 6
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A Cold Winter’s Night
Snow dropping down like a cup being poured.
Snow balls shooting like a rocket.
I love winter.
The cat warms against the fire.
The ice drips down on the cold smooth snow.
The children play on the ice as loud as a lions roar.
I love winter.
A woolly hat is as soft as cotton wool.
Boots are as stiff as a rock.
My coat is as long as a million meter sticks.
Winter is as cold as the Arctic, I hate it.
I don’t like winter.
By Corey
Age 11
Year 6
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A Cold Winter’s Night
Snow dropping down like a cup being poured.
Snow balls shooting like a rocket.
I love winter.
The cat warms against the fire.
The ice drips down on the cold smooth snow.
The children play on the ice as loud as a lions roar.
I love winter.
A woolly hat is as soft as cotton wool.
Boots are as stiff as a rock.
My coat is as long as a million meter sticks.
Winter is as cold as the Arctic, I hate it.
I don’t like winter.
By Corey
Age 11
Year 6
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