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Monday 1 December 2008

"Snow Falling" by Sean G, Age 6, Year 2

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Snow Falling

Once upon a time there lived an alien called Kieran. Kieran had not seen snow before. Then it started snowing. He thought it was monsters from the sky.

Suddenly a real monster came. It was made out of fire. The snow put out the fire monster and the fire got turned into gas.

Afterwards Kieran saw a human and asked what it was falling from the sky. The human was called Sean and Sean said: “That is not a monster, that is snow.”

Sean showed Kieran how to throw a snowball. Kieran said, “terrific”. Sean and Kieran made a snowman and they became good friends. The best thing of all was the snowman. It came to life by magic and they called it Thomas and it became their friend too.

The End

By Sean G

Age 6

Year 2

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3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very good Sean.

Why am I an Alien?

Kieran

Anonymous said...

This is a great story Sean. Kieran sounds like a friendly monster.

Anonymous said...

Great story Sean, love the idea that the alien thought snow was a monster!
Michelle