"Winter Story" by Carl B, Age 9, Year 5

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Winter Story

As the trees howl
the snow falls
and the lightening strikes.


The old man is in his house with the cozy fire. He looks out the window and finds a boy walking alone by himself. Then all of a sudden the boy crossed the slimy slippery road and slips. The old man had seen this and went out with a scarf and a coat and invited the boy in. The man gave him a cup of tea and then played Monopoly. Then the boy said thank you to the old man and went on his way. But when the boy left the lightening hit him and the house and left two poor people to go to hospital and also left the old man with a burnt house.


Carl B
Age 9
Year 5
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